don't dream it's over
My Nano novel is now finished. It’s been officially validated at 50, 152 words. That’s it. Phew.
Well. I say finished, but actually it really just stops. There has been absolutely no plot resolution of any kind and all of the various threads that I have laboriously constructed have been left swinging in the breeze. As of now, I have no intention of finishing off the story. Nor do I intend to go back and churn through some of the mountains dreadful writing and flimsy plotting that I know is in there.
The fact that the ‘finished novel’ contains the following piece of dialogue, I think it says it all:
“Yes Gwilym. Do try to keep up. These are the rats that I was telling you about, the ones that I met this afternoon”.
“The same rats you met this afternoon?”
“Yes”
“Doesn’t that strike you as a touch unbelievable? Of all the rats that must live in York, that we bump into the same two that you happen to have met this afternoon?”
John thought for a moment. “Yes, I suppose it does, but here they are. What can you do?”
I think the bones of a story are in there somewhere, and I think that with some work it could maybe be turned into something. Right now though, I just can’t be arsed to go back and do the editing and re-working that would be necessary to turn it into something usable. It’s time to take a break.
I’m keeping it though – perhaps in a folder marked “juvenalia”. One day, perhaps, I will return to it and find out what happens.
Maybe.
I do like that talking raven though. He's called Arthur.
Well. I say finished, but actually it really just stops. There has been absolutely no plot resolution of any kind and all of the various threads that I have laboriously constructed have been left swinging in the breeze. As of now, I have no intention of finishing off the story. Nor do I intend to go back and churn through some of the mountains dreadful writing and flimsy plotting that I know is in there.
The fact that the ‘finished novel’ contains the following piece of dialogue, I think it says it all:
“Yes Gwilym. Do try to keep up. These are the rats that I was telling you about, the ones that I met this afternoon”.
“The same rats you met this afternoon?”
“Yes”
“Doesn’t that strike you as a touch unbelievable? Of all the rats that must live in York, that we bump into the same two that you happen to have met this afternoon?”
John thought for a moment. “Yes, I suppose it does, but here they are. What can you do?”
I think the bones of a story are in there somewhere, and I think that with some work it could maybe be turned into something. Right now though, I just can’t be arsed to go back and do the editing and re-working that would be necessary to turn it into something usable. It’s time to take a break.
I’m keeping it though – perhaps in a folder marked “juvenalia”. One day, perhaps, I will return to it and find out what happens.
Maybe.
I do like that talking raven though. He's called Arthur.
9 Comments:
At 2:05 pm, Mark said…
I have word envy. 35,002 times.
At 3:46 pm, Anonymous said…
Congratulations!
At 4:16 pm, her said…
It all sounds a tad Maurice and his Educated Rodents to me....
At 5:24 pm, HistoryGeek said…
You do realize that you are less than half way through the month and, at least theoretically, could still write another novel.
I can say this comfortably from an ocean away, knowing there is nothing that can possibly be thrown that far.
At 6:11 pm, Aravis said…
Spins, I said the same to him and he roundly ignored me! *G*
Your book sounds interesting. I hope you do come back to it someday, when you're no longer NaNo'ed out.
At 10:00 pm, Anonymous said…
I'm not sure what that passage is about, but I adore it. Like, seriously, deeply, massively adore it. It makes me want to read the entire novel.
And I'm back! Briefly at least...
At 10:51 am, Anonymous said…
Good work. You've now written 2 more novels than anyone else I know.
At 10:51 am, Kelly said…
Congratulations. I am insanely jealous of your sucess. When I saw that little Nano widget with the blue line all the way to the right hand side I almost turned green.
I am at 33,888 and although it keeps moving I wish it was over and I could go back to reality!
At 6:52 pm, Stef said…
I couldn't leave something unfinished like that, it would drive me nuts.
Part of the reason I never start these things in the first place really!
Congrats on completing it though!
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